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I LOVE all the VN references ^^_ have I found them all, or have I missed 1ne?

THE BEAST

Nerus

Cor

9:22

BTHr

I.C.O.

Dawn Chorus

Shelter

No More Future

Distant Travels

Psychic Connections

Blue Cloth

Repeat

Crescendo? (That moon T-shirt in Luna's store)

Minotaur Hotel

Burrows

Sileo: Tale of a New Dawn

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*nose bleed* o///o

XD

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Just made an account to say that I love the dedication that you have put in the story and the drawings.

There are some small typos here and there but other than that I really enjoyed this VN so far. I'll be definitely looking forward to the next chapters!

Thank you

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The kobold is so cute 😍 

teehee~

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Honestly the history is great and the characters are perfect, and the art style is so original and cool, I definetely liked the game and am looking forward for the next updates!

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im still waing for da update ow

There you go~ hehehehe~

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I hope your doing good ghostie 

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0w0

0w0

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I started reading this VN recently, and I already love it so much!! 

It's full of life, and it's easy to tell how passionate the creator is. Every part of the writing and art has a contagious enthusiasm. I want to know what happens next, but even if nothing happened in the plot, I'd happily keep reading just for the tone/vibe. I'm trying to write my own VN, and I definitely learned a lot about what I want to do from this one. Excellent work <3

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i give this shit like a 9/10 now i would give it a 10/10 but i feel like bein a bitch rn and give you a point off just cause i feel like it.

In actualluty. how the fuck u spell actualuality. This visual novel really makes me excited to read more. I'm very curious to see what Damian can do with his spirit! The music choice was really good, I felt like I got hit by a bus when we were in Damian's flashback.

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oh yeah question, when you do face expressions do you have to erase the color and then make the expressions? cuz i'm confused on how you do it because erasing colors in paper is hard

I drew another one on another paper.

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So was Steve(thats the lizard dudes name right) following us to the new city or was it just a coincidence that we both are there

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Did you use sounds from you other VN?

Some of it, yes.

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i think hand drawn has it own charm to it X3

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Teehee~ thanks~

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your art style wasnt my favorite at first but it quickly took top five

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Thank you, I'm glad you like it :p

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also I'm mad at the major cliffhanger in the BEAST and will only forgive you if you make sure to take mental health breaks

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Nice game so far keep up the good work

Thank you

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Love how you have the guy from no more future, Wen he packed them i thought i seen him to

teehee~

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I'm liking the story so far! The characters are very endearing and I like how you successfully manage the shifts from the serious bits to the silly bits, kudos!

The humor also works for me, which is pretty rare in the VNs I've read so far. I especially chuckle when Damien talks to the Player (even though I hope the reason for this fourth wall breaks will be explored later on). xD

Keep up the work!

Hehe, thank you~ I'm glad you like it

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Can't see a third of the screen on Android you need to make the text background transparent and smaller and maybe a hide button

Gotcha~ I'll keep that in mind

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What a lovely VN💗

Hehe~ Thank you~

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Those references are hilarous, I already have liked this proyect,  I think I'll leave it installed...

Another thing: Spoilers (Maybe). Quit reading you people who haven't played the game. :v








If It's not a burden, Can I correct some things I detected?

1. "That's all I ASK for" Asked is in past, and I think he means that in present :3

2. "Yeah, I (instead of "my". It indicates a possesion, like "My notebook is blue...) often SIT... "Sits is for third person."

3.  "You SEEM to know..." Again, seems is for third person :3


Again. Hope It's not a burden, and if it is, I'll delete the comment. No strings attached.

And thank you, I like this visual novel.

Teehee~ thank you for pointing out my type/grammar~ I appreciate it~ :p

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hello! I played the demo and it was great! it's nice to see different species than the usual aside from the protagonist. I noticed you have made a lot reference from other visual novels and how in the in-story they are either movies or series. Keep up the good work! :D

Thank you, I'm glad you like it

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I love the references you put from others vns

Teehee~

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I am so excited 😊 

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An amazing start to the story! I really liked all of those references from different VNs and all of their plushies were adorable. The story seems really interesting so far and we already got a glimpse of some of the character's backstory which already gives us someone to choose as a favorite. As always, amazing artwork. It's really impressive to be drawing all of these characters and backgrounds by hand with so much detail. Keep up the amazing work!

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it.

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Just played it!  Enjoyable, thanks for posting

Thank you

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Nyah~ ^w^ I love all the references to other VN's! :D This story is really cute so far~!

Thank you, I'm glad you like it

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Was fun! I hope the name isn't too hard to remember and search for. I'll probably just remember it as spirit summoners by ghostie xD

You can try SSoAC :p

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Already looks fun to play and I havent tried it out yet

XD

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Love what I've read so far. Amazing work!

Thank you.

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YAY you financially got this out I've been waiting

Teehee~